This is the structure of the story without dialouge, the conversation between billy and the rogrob will be longer and also the conversation with the villagers will be longer too, i am thinking 1 minute for the introduction, then 2 minutes from in dream to finish.
Synopsis
Billy is a 6 year old boy, he plays Games with his friends like all 6 Year old boys do, but his favourite game is Knights, where Billy gets to be the fiercest knight in all the land, Sir Billy of Braveington. This story is about Billy's dreams, flying, talking to animals, having all the sweets in the world, but most of all, he dreams of his dad, and how he wants him back, However this dream is all about Sir Billy of Braveington, and how the villagers of Little Lake need his help from the monstrous Rogrob, who is eating all there valuable crops! The monster needs to be stopped and Billy is the Knight for the job!
Story
We open to a shot of a pair of Red curtains and the tittles Billy's dream drop down made of cardboard and hanging on rope, they then go back up and the curtains draw to a fade up of Billy's room with Billy laying in bed at night, with the moon casting a light across the room and on to Billy, we then see some dream bubbles pop up from his head getting bigger with each bubble until we see what he is dreaming in the largest one.
We see Billy flying through the sky, this then changes to him landing in a forest and a bear comes up and Billy talks to it we also see some dear in the background listening in on the conversation, this then changes to a world made of sweets and the bear transforms into a gummy bear and the forest turns into sweets too, then this all disappears and we see Billy sitting on a swing getting pushed by his dad and as the swing comes back from the push his dad fades out and the swing stops swinging, this then all pops away and we see Billy standing in full cardboard Medieval armour in the village of Little Lake, with 4 Villagers Standing in front of him, the woman villager asks him to save them, Billy asks what from, and the old man villager shouts out the Rogrob, that blasted monster has been eating all our crops, we then hear another old man yell "HE ATE ALL MY TURNIPS!", the woman tells Billy where he can find the monster and Billy agrees to do the deed of getting rid of him, and runs up the hill next to the village and up to the front of the cave where Billy stands eagerly awaiting the monster. There is a large grumbling sound and Billy looks away with closed eyes and Cardboard sword pointed at the cave and ready for the monster, a hand comes out and gets pricked on the palm by the tip of the sword, there is a large ouch followed by crying, the monster walks out and asks why would he do this to him, Billy tells the monster of how the villagers are angry that he has been eating all there crops, the monster apologises as does Billy, Billy asks why he has been eating all the crops, and the monster tells Billy that his name is Carl and where he comes from he was cast out, because he didn't want to frighten people and destroy villages, they told him he wasn't a real monster and told him that he could never see his son again, Billy tells Carl that his dad went into the army and never came back, they look at each other and Billy asks Carl if he will be his dad, Carl tells Billy only if you will be my son, they hold hands then with a puff of smoke it goes back to Billy's room with a shot of Billy with a large smile on his face holding onto the covers tightly, we then see a light appear across Billy's face of a door opening and hear a mans voice say "Billy" the curtains draw back again, and "the end" drops down made of cardboard again.
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